Encounters with a Stone Age fishing party

“The Stone Age person had lots of twigs in it’s scruffy hair. He had a curled spear to fish. He was creeping up to hunt for food. He had a bow and arrow to hunt. He was covered in black and red paint. Then another man came to help the other Stone Age person to hunt the animals. They have disgustingly smelly toes and a sling shot to sling stones at animals. They have clothes made of animal skin.”  

– Dayton, tracker.

3 thoughts on “Encounters with a Stone Age fishing party

  1. Great description Dayton. Have you thought about using Similes in your writing it could add to it even further. Keep the descriptive writing up!
    Mr Cannon 3SC

  2. Well done Dayton. You must be an excellent tracker to have noticed so many details! I hope you didn’t have to get dirty and smelly too while you were investigating!

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